for some strange reason I hear madonna's song "Live to Tell" in your song. Not that you were aiming for that...just the pace...and such. Hey look at it this way...she's famous....an rich----------this could be an omen for great things to come your way. Peace.
lol never heard the song lol. I don't listen to Madonna lol
I liked everything about it...make more of these. Great job.
I shall,when Im not busy...
if you like this one,check out Snake Bone Room,or People Siezed With Life.
Ok it is a bit sloppy...and off beat and out of tune...but so is life. Great job with the ending. The timing made it loop just write.,oops I mena right....see no one's perfect...even at 4am in the mornin. You keep up your creative edge...and soon you'll have a title and everything. Wish my shit were on here...how long did it take for you to get your song on? Sorry, back to the critique....great effort...now finish the darn song already. Peace, bra.
check out my other songs bro this ones outdated!
if i could figure out how i tuned my guitar in this i could finish it hehe
I think you worked very hard on this....and probably were hitting the bottle a little, too....weren't you. Some token, too....and I m' not talking JRR either. Ska away, bra'
I think you have more than that....
Last Chance has given you hope and this piece works and flows and Bravo.
It lives up to its name. I know it is a short piece that loops...watch the creative pauses...it falls quiet a second or two too long before it re-loops and your like...did a snake jump out of the basket and bite the player. Very outside sunny Prince of Arabia inspired music. Great Job
Thanks! Yeah, I actually didn't mean to have such long a pause, but I can't edit it at the moment :(
good name for a piece that had me spinning. there is so much depth here. A little bit beefier and it will be just right. It has conviction and is not bad for 2 minutes...however, needs work to loop better...i slike it.
I am so relaxed with this piece...unless you're gonna add vocals to it right away....leave it be. Peace, bro' it works on its own.
thx glad u like
Fire and Cool Beans
This is the Caramel Apple Empenada man. Put some hot sauce on it and your golden. Great Latin feel.
But I can't handle the heat of hot sauce...
Not what they said.....
I am digging this groove. I think the bass should be grittier, but it still works. Also, it loops right, even though it is placed as a song. I'm not going to compare it to anything. One tip for you...you changed out the riff abit by 1:54....which is good....something to come back in from....try adding some slappy bass (like Chili Peppers feel) and kick-it with a tequila synth remix -golden and smooth...horns (not blaring trumpets)....some french horns and saxes...baritone saxed...killer man---I can hear all that with just your bass-line. Great Piece...Peace.
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