Boy does that bring back Sega Memories. I liked how you incorporated the actual Sega Sonic moving in your Flash...and than had all the illustrations and backgrounds moving. Please make more, but show Sonic terrorizing Professor Robotnic. Great Job. Ok..here are the links: 1. Dragons Beginnings (song) http://www.newgounds.com/audio/listen /
226159 or 2. Dragons New Flight (song) http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n /225975 or 3. last, but certainly not least....My very first Frame by Frame Flash Animation "Cheating Death Remake 2009 (Colab with music by krssvr) : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /
490357 ENJOY and Keep Creativity Alive. PEACE
The entire slide-ride effect was cool...and the add a pipe gag was funny....it worked. Jumping the shark takes on a whole new meaning with this Flash....and a whole new meaning for FLASHING, too. Very Well Done....as is the head of the slider going through the kitchen stove-burners. LOL
I know what you're saying...so spit it out already. I have seen some storyboards in my life....but this takes the cake. The BIG massive Pile. Sorry...but this needs work on soooooo many levels...I will not be further judgemental. If you are just starting out...Bravo for the effort...but if you have resources (like the internet) take some tutorials for free on voice...drawing ...and technique. It couldn't hurt. I did like one part...when Dr. Robotnic comes front screen and the red and black are streaming...good change up. A for effort, D for level of execution and C for Completion...that equals " AVERAGE"
Yo....the big picture....
..."what is an origami pelican doing in a place like this?" Funny. Even when Cortana lost her service, I LOL. It was a bit immature, but better things come with practice. And these days...use whatever works for you...and keep developing. It will click sooner or later. Peace.
...But also funny and thought provoking. It makes you wonder. Wouldn't he have died a slow agonizing death himself? If that gun went off and the glass broke...he would have been like...oh crap! Then flushed out with the glass and water. It worked well and the motion of the fish bobbing was seamless, that's a plus. A for effort.
I have seen everything...but this definitely takes the fudge....er, um CAKE. LOL. For Concept...I give you a 3...too Mr. Hankie, for me. But we all start somewhere. For Effects...I give you a 1...need to work on that much...much, much more. The fudge hardly moves...his mouth moves like a bad...but classic martial arts movie......And for overall Execution...2. Please reconfigure your efforts. So its a 6...good try
Freaking Me Out Rex
I'm not even drinking and I see pigs flying. LOL. In all honesty...your graphix are bold, clean and very articulate. GREAT FREAKING JOB....darn it. Keep it comin...more
Only kidding. I see potential in this piece. Definitely rough around all of the edges. I give it a 5 for effort. You know what would have been funny, if the door opens and either the Detective, who is metal...that makes him a Metal Detector..no...if when he comes in the door and says :now, where is that villain?" he slips on "the fish" in the dark. or actually opens the door into the Fish, squishing him a bit behind the door. Comedy man...it's riddled with comedy. Keep working on it.
Somehow...you knew Sonic would come out ahedge...i mead a head of Vegeta in this episode. Great Job....making me laugh. It's raining....blood Goku.
Thanks Emuzin, you're review made me smile.
OLD SCHOOL, YO.
Here is my review....very fair, indeed. I liked this. It brought me back years. Was that a poke'ball design on the floor of the general store. Observant. I give you a 7. Parts of this were edgy and then there are the dramatic grammar moments. Zombies can't spell, but we can. Brains, no matter how you look at them, or spell them are not made more plural by adding an ES. Peace- Good Effort.
What? I didn't add an ES. Trust me bud, I KNOW WORDS!
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