Dreamscape....
...I am not sure if that is a good name for this piece....maybe Parallewarp of Twisted Flight would be better. (okay..now 16,000 viewers are all going to write a portal song called either of them.) I agree with another viewer/voter...at 1:34-the music imagery is disrupted and you think that it will grow with different sounding instruments- like horns or something...well something else. Good Attempt.
Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwuh!
Man...I wish I could play guitar like that, but that doesn't mean I don't know music. The composition itself is great...just a few guitar pitch issues....too many near rubs for my taste. However it pushed forth. The bass seems to fall away for some reason...I still like it. I'm feelin it. Peace headbanger.
FLUID...TOO MUCH FUEL
This works, and I agree...very James Bond-ish (as someone else stated). However, your levels are way out there and kinda makes it hard to enjoy. But I guess we can say James got shot in the ear...and this is how it would sound....all distorted. REmix it for us...we still like it, truthfully.
What the....?
I don't not like this. However, Come on...it is over 4 minutes long with the same riff, no variation (yes it paused by 1:58 for thunder....thankfully) but then it started the same riff...and it hasn't even looped yet from the ending. I feel like I've already heard it. Deja DOO. You're a Mad Man, Stimpy. NIce effort, though I would like it more if it had....i don't know....MORE.
Nice Dedication
To me, your song really expresses that you are thinking of someone....maybe, no quite definitely someone that you have lost along the way....and you are walking, I see you walking down a dirt road...with the clouds rolling through the sky, but a distant ray of light shining down to get you through your despair. Peace to you....this is a great composition for under 2 minutes. You should feel a sense of pride...I 'm sure the person you dedicated this to thinks so, too. No, not a 5, a 5 plus 10.
thanks i put alot into this.
Yikes....LOL
The beginning reminds me of a big freaking GNAT or Mosquito on CRACK, or something, LOL. It isn't my style, but you still showed detail to your composition. Just watch your ear-bleeding levels. Good Effort
It's Crystal Clear.....
That you are slightly cocky....calling out for challenges. I guess that's sort of a good quality-staying positive...shows you know how hard you work on stuff. Don't get me wrong....i like this piece, good tone, percussion and over-all it works. However, you could have just made it shorter, it really is just a BIG LOOP.
thanks man
Nice Job...
Guess "you're just drawn that way" huh. Your vocals are a cross between the late Cobain and a past acquaintance of mine, the also late Mike Gibbons formerly of Bad Finger. Justice is served-----10 to you, man.
ah that reminds me of other lyrics of mine, how "all my idols tend to kill themselves, my heroes tend to die young." thanks for the flattering comparison on both counts and of course the 10, and the reference! sweet.
Classically Executed
Thank you for the beautiful piano piece. when it began and then paused, i could hear the likes of Christina Aguilera starting to sing...that's a compliment. Great piece. Peace
Lost Dream...I sense that.
My side vote was 3-Butterscotch Yo---cuz it's smooth. This is a little bit rougher, but still good. dreams we lose or regain have the same journey, just different road. Some are rough, so are smooth. Good Effort, watch the overpowering levels, they smudge-muffle a bit. Peace
mmm... smooth... like rocky road ice cream!
thanks man. i'm still working out the bugs in the whole "music making" scheme, but any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
EMUZIN is back in the studio....creating MUZIK with a powerful blast of FIRE! PEACE YO!
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